Need help for checking my Japanese

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Need help for checking my Japanese; The message will be used for my page in the YUI fanbook proj
Topic Started: Mar 1 2010, 09:45:57 AM (701 Views)
tony	Mar 1 2010, 09:45:57 AM Post #1
The song in YUI's pocket... Posts: 20 Group: New Member Member #26,869 Joined: Feb 24 2010	Hey guys! Need help with this one. :please For Japanese speakers, can you guys pls check if the message below is correctly written? It's supposed to be used for my page for YUI's fanbook project: こんにちはYUIさん！お誕生日おめでとう！トニーです。お元気ですか？私はよくやっている願っています。私はYUIさんのお誕生日には、この描き、私はYUIちゃんの反応のようなときは、この参照してくださいどうなるのだろうか。これは、ページの下部に、日本の中にいる夢を見て私のして、ギターを例に飛び出るよう私はYUIが存在を与える！しかしそういったことは不可能かもしれない。私はそのギターケースの中にとにかく合うことができる方法はありません。しかし、ある日、大学から、私は卒業するまで、私は日本に行く予定です。私がこのメッセージを書く、私は常に自分自身に"どうすればよいですか"しかし、考えて今、私の言うことが一番の中心部からだと思う。 YUIさん、日本では、常に刺激的人々は、世界のすべての部品をありがとう！ YUIさんの音楽は常に幸せと笑顔になります。私はYUIちゃんとYUIさんの特別な日に幸せになってYUIさんのキャリアでより多くの成功をお祈りします。してください、常に笑顔満足している！ため、私は微笑するときにも笑顔を見せる。 YUIさん好き！私は常に、5年前から今日まではいつでもYUIさんが好きだ。うわー、私はそれを信じることができない！本当に5年間ですでにそれていますか？このトピックでは、記念日おめでとう！それは、昨日、私はテレビでYUIさんの曲の演奏のように思える。 YUIさんの髪は長く、当時、私はYUIさん瞬時に魅了されました。私はすべてYUIさんの歌を愛し、私は彼らには、ほぼ毎日聞く。私は、YUIさん5年前はまだだと思うYUI今日の。 YUIさんは本当にかわいいですし、才能ある。 YUIさん最高だよ！そしてYUIさんはいつも私のYUIです。それでは、これが私のメッセージの終わりです。私はYUIさんちょっと笑ったりも、私の図面からは笑顔が願っています。私はいつかお会いすることができます願っています。あなたともう一度ありがとう、お誕生日おめでとう！！乾杯！トニー ------------------------------------ So what do you think? Does it translate to this (or at least with the same idea): Hello YUI-chan! Happy birthday! This is tony. How are you? I hope you are doing well. I drew this for your birthday and I wonder what your reaction would be like when you see this. That�s me at the bottom of the page, dreaming of being in Japan and popping out of your guitar case as I give you a present! Though that sort of thing might be impossible. There is no way I can fit inside the guitar case anyway. But until the day that I graduate from university, I plan to go to Japan. As I write this message, I constantly think to myself �what should I say?� But now, I think the best thing to say is from the heart. YUI-chan, thank you for always inspiring people in Japan and all parts of the world! Your music always makes us happy and smile. I wish you more success with your carreer and to be happy on your special day. Please be happy always and smile! Because I smile when you smile too. I like YUI! I�ve always liked you since 5 years ago until today and always will. Wow, I can�t believe it! Has it really been five years already? On that topic, congratualtions on the anniversary! It seems like only yesterday when I heard YUI�s song play in the television. YUI�s hair was long back then and I was captivated by YUI instantly. I love all your songs and I listen to them almost everyday. I think that the YUI five years ago is still the YUI of today. YUI is really cute and talented. YUI is the greatest! And YUI is always my YUI. Well then, this is the end of my message. I hope you had a little laugh or even a smile from my drawing. I hope I can meet you someday. Thank you and once again, happy birthday!!!! Cheers! Tony ----------------------------- Sorry... It's quite long, I know. But need help. Pls? :please Many thanks!!! :gboy Edited by tony, Mar 4 2010, 01:00:58 PM.
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tony	Mar 2 2010, 01:29:35 PM Post #2
The song in YUI's pocket... Posts: 20 Group: New Member Member #26,869 Joined: Feb 24 2010	:what Really? No one? Oh well... Guess I'll just send it in simple English then... :sry
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Ids	Mar 2 2010, 08:00:25 PM Post #3
- Posts: 1,210 Group: YUI Lovers Member #15,037 Joined: Aug 12 2008	You shouldnt listen to me, since I only know a tiny bit Japanese (I can't read the kanji etc @@ ) But maybe, I'm not sure there's just one little point which would be the style of the letter. I'm talking about using chan (but im not sure wether it can be used for formal or informal) but you also use 'ogenki desu ka' which I think is very formal ne? I'm not sure how it works in Japanese but at least in my own language it would be kinda confusing to use 2 different styles, but maybe im talking sh*t :sry
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SoraHikari	Mar 3 2010, 12:07:58 AM Post #4
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akuma_tsubasa	Mar 3 2010, 04:30:20 AM Post #5
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tony	Mar 3 2010, 01:28:39 PM Post #6
The song in YUI's pocket... Posts: 20 Group: New Member Member #26,869 Joined: Feb 24 2010	Ids Mar 2 2010, 08:00:25 PM You shouldnt listen to me, since I only know a tiny bit Japanese (I can't read the kanji etc @@ ) But maybe, I'm not sure there's just one little point which would be the style of the letter. I'm talking about using chan (but im not sure wether it can be used for formal or informal) but you also use 'ogenki desu ka' which I think is very formal ne? I'm not sure how it works in Japanese but at least in my own language it would be kinda confusing to use 2 different styles, but maybe im talking sht :sry Hmmm yeah it does look kinda out there. :sry really, really not sure about this at all. Also, perhaps instantly calling/saying YUI with a -chan right away would be offensive on her part. I'm really worried about this 'cause the last thing I want is to offend YUI-sama. Plus the drawing that comes with it may also offend her (but not if she has a sense of humor, which I think she does, definitely!) but still a bit worried though. And I've consulted with a friend of mine who knows Japanese and she said that my message (written in Japanese) might seem cute and childish. Whatever that meant. Hehe she said it's because I've got a few (a lot) of grammatical errors but that it's still comprehensible somewhat. ^^ But I might just send in the English version though. Hopefull YUI will be able to read/find someone to translate it. @SoraHikari: still thanks! :good @akuma_tsubasa: uwaaa~ thanks... but it's not that good. hehe :gboy Edited by tony*, Mar 3 2010, 01:31:38 PM.
	"Life doesn't give YUI lemons, YUI gives lemons to LIFE!!" ~whaaat?~


Miyuki	Mar 4 2010, 01:10:11 AM Post #7
YUI Argentina! Posts: 337 Group: YUI Lovers Member #25,336 Joined: Jun 2 2009	oohh sorry, i didn't see this... i'll try to correct it but not sure i'll do a good job xD you should ask mrsean... first of all, you may want to show everything... that "..." are cutting every long sentence... :S well... if i were you, i'll change all the informal sentences, it's a bit rude since she doesn't know you and you may want to show respect for her. Aaand, i'll change the -chan's for -san. Edited by Miyuki, Mar 4 2010, 01:21:41 AM.



tony	Mar 4 2010, 12:48:09 PM Post #8
The song in YUI's pocket... Posts: 20 Group: New Member Member #26,869 Joined: Feb 24 2010	Miyuki Mar 4 2010, 01:10:11 AM oohh sorry, i didn't see this... i'll try to correct it but not sure i'll do a good job xD you should ask mrsean... first of all, you may want to show everything... that "..." are cutting every long sentence... :S well... if i were you, i'll change all the informal sentences, it's a bit rude since she doesn't know you and you may want to show respect for her. Aaand, i'll change the -chan's for -san. uwaaaaa~~~ Miyuki-san! =O =O =O I didn't even noticed! how stupid of me... awww... so my message really was cut... yeah, it really is rude of me... T_T im sorry... nooooooe... :what runs away but I'll change it anyways... and I've edited the message to show everything... I hope someone will still translate it...
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Miyuki	Mar 5 2010, 12:29:53 AM Post #9
YUI Argentina! Posts: 337 Group: YUI Lovers Member #25,336 Joined: Jun 2 2009	haha now it's ok xD i insist, change the informal expresions... :P



MonkOfWar	Mar 7 2010, 09:48:38 AM Post #10
Yes! AK-74 in Battlefield 3. Posts: 874 Group: YUI Lovers Member #24,957 Joined: Apr 7 2009	Stick with 'san さん' if unsure.　'ちゃん' is normally used by adults on younger children or by friends who have known each other for sometime. And don't use 'sama 様� when talking or messaging to the person in question please! You're not talking to your boss or some feudal lord!


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